The last sentence is sort of confusing- I'm not sure what you're trying to say. I like how your introduction discussing your personal internet use runs full cirlce and you tie it back to your literacy and internet habits again at the end.
Excellent arrangement! Your paper was really entertaining and i felt like i was learning something. I have a few corrections that i will give you in class, i printed them for you. I hope you don't hate me after my corrections!
The last sentence is sort of confusing- I'm not sure what you're trying to say. I like how your introduction discussing your personal internet use runs full cirlce and you tie it back to your literacy and internet habits again at the end.
ReplyDeleteExcellent arrangement! Your paper was really entertaining and i felt like i was learning something. I have a few corrections that i will give you in class, i printed them for you. I hope you don't hate me after my corrections!
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