Methods/Materials- I like the way you sight not just our blogs in class, but the ones regarding Finnish students. Thats an interesting point of view we don't usually see.
Keywords- I like the common ADHD you mention. It is a clever way of labeling our thought processes.
Limitations- Now with the new organization, I don't see any limitations!
Project: FORCE me to have an opinion on the effect of the internet on our generation. Methods: Present me with your information and opinions, as well as those that disagree with you in order to fully inform me. Materials: YOUR NOGGIN! And the writings of others.
Keywords: "values" stuck with me, it speaks about our progress (good and bad) You used the word "however" in a way that didn't contradict what you had mentioned previous to it, rather, it enhanced it.
Limitations: As I wrote for Meagan's blog, your writing probably isn't forceful enough to convince those who are stuck in their ways. This isn't a big problem, but your paper is very much improved so I had to find something for both you and Meagan's papers.
Good work with the revisions. I can see much more organization went into this one and it makes it easier to read!
ReplyDeleteMethods/Materials- I like the way you sight not just our blogs in class, but the ones regarding Finnish students. Thats an interesting point of view we don't usually see.
ReplyDeleteKeywords- I like the common ADHD you mention. It is a clever way of labeling our thought processes.
Limitations- Now with the new organization, I don't see any limitations!
Project: FORCE me to have an opinion on the effect of the internet on our generation.
ReplyDeleteMethods: Present me with your information and opinions, as well as those that disagree with you in order to fully inform me.
Materials: YOUR NOGGIN! And the writings of others.
Keywords: "values" stuck with me, it speaks about our progress (good and bad)
You used the word "however" in a way that didn't contradict what you had mentioned previous to it, rather, it enhanced it.
Limitations: As I wrote for Meagan's blog, your writing probably isn't forceful enough to convince those who are stuck in their ways. This isn't a big problem, but your paper is very much improved so I had to find something for both you and Meagan's papers.
FANTASTIC WRITING!!